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If i could warn myself from 3 days ago that i was about to read the most boring paper thin obnoxious story ever i would because i had to force myseld to end this.
the bottom is spineless and honestly doesnt look like he likes the top until the very end (hes straight up terrified EVEN THEN) and i have absolutely NO WORDS on how much i wanted to smash the tops neck. How dare he say hes possessive of the bottom and not take care of him? how he didnt finish the cousin? how he didnt finish the other dude? he only threatened to end bottom again and again.
so ,no feelings, not even sexual tension that looks good enough between them seems genuine
is just a pile of rubbish
the only joy in this story is the tops minions. theyre fun
NOT WORTH IT, PEOPLE.
Thanks for the warning fam. I was gonna start reading this because it didn't seem that long and I was bored. But I don't wanna read a boring story to cure my boredom.
Has any of the people complaining read any chapter at all of the story? the protagonist IS EVIL, he has said time and again that he WILL damage and destroy people if he has something to gain from it, regardless of who it is. He has terrible friends and is slowly taming and trapping jorga to be his very own attack dog and is destroying the chick who stole his daughters place piece by piece, thats his plan since the beginning
How can you be shocked when he does exactly what he keeps saying he's going to do, lol
I love this story ,especially because the main character is actually evil and manipulative but I feel like you can show that without the bestiality, and the other chapters proved that.His revenge arc is great and I think jorgas subsequent corruption will be amazing, I just don't think that scene was necessary beyond shock value.
he had someone addicted to the point that person had to sell herself to some mercenaries, raped his wife (that he stole from jorga, btw), stole plenty of treasure from the people of his country, and so on. Do you honestly think any crime is worse, that he has a moral code of some sort? that he would somehow stop at this bc this he doesnt do, after telling again and again hes capable of everything?
idk what to tell you. just stop reading.