beta
-first chapters are lowkey super rushed. we didn't spend enough time with the zombie/world ending part at the start (to me ir felt like when you're writing a fic in your head before bed and you keep jumping ahead to the good bits because you want both characters together.) he just found him, saved him bc he's a teacher and now they're suddenly in a small utopia ? we could have spent more time with them in the journey, see how they get to know each other maybe?
-there's no reason for guwon to be attracted to the mc yet, i don't understand where this infatuation is coming from. he has no personality so far.
-the body proportions are ludicrous, the scene (cap5) of them standing in front of each other made roll my eyes so far i think i saw my brain.
-i love a good himbo but there's a disconnect between his sleazy underworld looks and his role as a leader, it's giving me the ick