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Normally I eat vampire stuff up even if it's not that great but this is... kinda bad
I can't tell if it's actually trying to be a period piece or if it's just aesthetic. It doesn't hit the mark either way tbh
More vampire lore needed!!! He feels so weak, what's the deal with that? They can grow wings and fly but can't fight off a few guards? They don't even seem a little scared of him. How is he at such a disadvantage even when he's allowed to drink blood?
I hope it gets better cuz I know I'll read the whole thing anyway lol