
I don't understand shit, what's going on? But I'm in it. Literally having no clue of who could be doing what and whatnot. Reading this feels like we're actually in Jun's shoes. That's quite interesting. Jun is so calculative, love that side of him.

I can't really tell you which scenes because there are a lot of them that got cut out, but the important scenes isn't cut. It's just that the cut out make the scenes jump from one event to another without a proper logic. Basically the cut out parts are just telling you why this and that event happened. Sorry if this is confusing, English isn't my first language.

This is so good
I'm here crying tears again. Akabeku really gets deep. I'm glad that everything was explained and had depth. My heart hurts at their toddler part. Makoto really cared for his younger brother even though he barely received love and care from anyone. I really liked the character of makoto blond dad who wasn't his biological dad.
Nooooo, who the fuck does that bastard think he is??? I literally wanna gut out that giant asshole. I don't like where this is going. Even puny got hit by him. My anger just goes