Whys no one talking about the monster in his pants. Compared it to my stomach and nearly got hypertension just THINKING of taking it. Opened my mouth to see what he was putting in there and DEAR god no. Not a chance. Too thick, too long, that's a fucking weapon of mass destruction. 0/10
Evb is shipping Chris Cedric and Jesse but Chris is just too young to be with them. She acts 16 at most it just feels weird. Her love for Jesse is also very clearly platonic I don't understand why everyone this she'd go well with them???? She's more like their daughter or Jesse's jalous little sister. Im 15 and her behavior is how I act with my older sister I'm js so lost here
this is the exact same as pornhwas written by men bro tf... insane power fantasies
there was sm wrong and it was such a potentially good story too. this was obvi written by an idol fan, bc the view on idols is so disgusting. like as much as i love the chubby female classmate, taking photos of someone when not in a fan setting IS creepy. I get thats to be expected with famous people, but his reaction was so out of touch. if i were yohan i wldnt have been like, 'wow! my fans must rly love me!' id be like 'wow! i truly am a product on display!' lmfao.... also the demonisation of idols in relationships and such. like that inkayan candy was the only bad person there, the others were rude, but entirely justified. fans DO come to fan meets stinky. its just the truth., idol fans ARE obsessive and weird most times (coming from a massive txt stan), and idols arent obligated to love them. a degree of respect is required, yes, but LOVING every single fan? yea not a chance. this story is the definition of rose colored glasses. so what if an idol smokes? is that bad? like does it affect you in any way? hows that corrupt? so what if an idols two faced? are they supposed to be themselves? then no one would like them and they wouldnt sell. simple.
I hate how these out of touch with reality males keep writing this dumb entirely unrealistic shit.. Women WILL NOT orgasm in 20 seconds just from getting it up the pussy. Like no foreplay too? And the weird ass anatomy too lol. And the "they tweated mwe wike I was invisible becwause of my backgwound!" Who the fuck genuinely ignores someone just bc their mama poor or some bs. Like I'm 30 seconds in and I can TELL this was written by an incel who got 'bullied' and blamed it on everyone else when he prolly did some weird shit that made no one wanna fw him...
In 99% of yiseols scenes there's some sort of sex appeal, and I'm aware she was possessed by a succubus before but is there a need to make EVERYTHING sexual?
I hate when authors make all their characters espscially the female ones lighter than snow and skinny as sticks. It's not beautiful it's unhealthy. they look anemic.
There's nothing attractive about looking like you'd die of skin cancer the second you step into sunlight, there's nothing atttactive about looking like you could be broken in half like a twig, there's nothing attractive about looking like a paper cut is all it takes to end your life, there is nothing attractive about having no blood circulation.
The singular normal healthy looking character (the darker skinned man from gottrov) was painted in a bad light for not helping her, given incredibly unremarkable features and being held in the shadow of the nox guy that literally looks like a rotting body with his complexion.
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Im not saying I want every character to be poc and fat, I'm js saying VARIETY would help. Same face syndrome is real and so is same body syndrome. Idc if they give them Caucasian features js pls at least make them look like they've been exposed to UV rays before. also give the pale ones a realistic skin tone that you'd see irl, like hate to admit it but being the same color as milk is kinda.. also idc if all main charas r white js wld help if they make at least some bg charas tan. Genuinely no problem w acknowledging melanin.
No shade to the author but this guy's diet is NOT healthy.
At that weight 5000 cherry tomatoes will lead to severe malnutrition, since he's bigger he needs more nutrients. Also working out 4 hrs a day WHILE MALNOURISHED is incredibly dangerous.
The last I heard, when a girl was forced to do this to lose weight, she died. She died in less than a year, lmfao. Making people think this is healthy is just not okay. This story is so dumb for that bro..
Also bulimia is a severe eating disorder, not a disease. It's not rare, and it's when someone (most times) has a severe diet that result in binge eats and, later on, induced vomiting. Bulimia is not a disease that causes severe gluttony