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Ok.
It's an interesting story, but it's got some major nopes.
Starting with the names, why are most Baskervilles named after dogs? I understand being "hounds", that's not original, but did they have to use literal species to name their characters? Took me a while to get used to it. Kinda makes it easier for me to associate the names to the characters, but that doesn't make it less confusing.
The collar with the chain. I get the meaning behind it. I get that's a gift from your most potential wife. But idk...
On the wife topic... Why the harem... Is there even a woman he met that hasn't fallen for him? Eh, probably Cindywindy, she looks like she still got her head on the shoulders.