Honest review? Wasn’t crazy about it. Art was pretty, main character was cute and relatable without being annoying or a Mary Sue, love interest was a dick but had his redeeming moments, and competition (lil bruv)was honestly really likable and cute. The story in general? awesome. Here’s where my complaint comes in. Maybe I’m biased and prefer a slower burn but this whole manga: pacing? Never heard of her. Honestly. There was a confession in the first 8 chapters. Like, for real? I still felt like the MC and her brothers had just met and they were already trying to do the chunky monkey. Like, honestly. There’s like minimal character development I feel like. Another thing that’s a bit troublesome (again, just personal preference) but I feel like there’s no subplot... at all? And if that’s done right then I really don’t mind, but I wouldn’t exactly say that this is done right. Honestly, great ideas, great characters, poor writing and pacing. Wayyy to quick for me. Another thing that peeved me a bit was the big bro being a bit rapey. I know this is shoujo and isn’t supposed to be realistic, but to be real if I were to get a step sibling right at this very moment, i wouldn’t want to tell them to be cautious of me (locking bathroom doors, etc.) and i most certainly wouldn’t imply that I or any of my male family members could molest them if they didn’t watch out?? Idk that part just rubbed me a bit the wrong way. Like??? You already see her as a sexualized object as opposed to a sibling you little bitch?? In my house I can leave the door unlocked and my whole family respects my goddamn privacy? And knocks?! Anyways, other than that and some weird plot inconsistencies, wasn’t a dreadful read. Would reccommend if you’re lookin for a quick fix with cute chars and nice art!! I know it’s not done, and i barely skimmed chapter 8, but I’ve read all I needed to hahaha
ALRIGHT SANGWOO
This season my man is just slipping farther and farther down the drain
I have so many emotions
I hate all of them
A cliche but it’s not even done well. Characters have no consistency with personalities, no actual defining characteristics (except that she’s “kind” and he’s “persistant”) and there doesn’t really seem to be much potential for story growth if this is more than a one shot.
The art has always been good but I feel like this new season the art is literally heart stopping!!! Like at the BJ scene, the way the muscles and highlights are drawn on Bum I literally lost my shit and stared at the panels for like 12 minutes aaA
Is it done? Wth? There’s so many unfinished plot lines? Like what about Hasumi or whatever his name was? Will he just suffer for eternity? There’s no resolution?
I have got the WORST case of second-lead-syndrome (commonly know as SLS) and I need immediate medical attention. If you or a loved one is also suffering from this terrible ailment, please seek medical help as soon as possible before their heart gets tore to shreds.
I can’t keep reading this ughh. I kept up with it for shinobu and chihiro but it doesn’t look like they get the limelight any time soon. Hikaru is sweet, but I cannot stand sayaka. She’s so annoy and has such a detestable personality (shy girl but also somehow good at everything, and is a quasi decent actor— making her a “natural genius”... seriously??) and is honestly ruining this whole story for me. Peace out y’all. Props if you got past ch 30
NOO DUDE IVE READ THE RAWS AND THERE IS SO MUCH SHINOBU X CHIHIRO IN FUTURE CHAPTERS THEY HAVE A WHOLE FHAPTER DEDICATED TO THEM HAVING SEX AND SHINOBU AND CHIHRIO ARE BOTH VIRGINS STILL . AND ITS SO GOOD DUDE
I hate sayaka and Hilaru . Tbh this story is so like unrealistic cause if it was realistic . Sayaka would be inlove with Hikaru before he liked her , hikaru would be inlove with chihiro , and chihrio would be inlove with shinobu
Well, this is fiction and just a shoujo manga..... targeted for young girls or with teenage taste.... so no wonder this is unrealistic
Right cause tbh mangas are not meant to be realistic I mean so of them are realistic but mangas are for when people when to get away from reality and be in their imagination so it not meant to be realistic it meant to be a good story for people to relate to or just simply have fun reading and exploring there imagination
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Thank you for agreeing with me..
I've been hearing a lot of talk about how the first couple is awful but I don't think they're bad at all I think there cute and lovey-dovey to each other I know I'm just barely on chapter 20 but I think they start out good . But I do have a problem with the manga about the second couple not having that much Pages for us to read about them I mean come on can't you just get them like some stuff for us to see how their relationship is developing.
MC has a personality for all of MAYBE two panels, cries so often that when she actually is crying as a major plot point to affect the audience/shock value it doesn’t have any affect, both guys are kinda awful but I prefer the white king because the black king claims to love her but like nearly raped her to make her hate him which is like 0% cool and also??? I find it hard that you would be able to put someone you even marginally like through that kind of pain, get about someone you love. Overall, mangas not a very good read unless you like rhetorical remarks such as “you made her cry, shirayuki?” (Yeah, not shit. She’ll cry over some goddamn vegetables if given the opportunity) and characters who are more “troupe” and less “personality”. The whole story felt really empty. Also??? Rip satsuki’s friend?? What’s the point of adding a friend if she doesn’t even contribute to the story?? She also keeps getting ditched by the MC which is hilarious to me