I LOVED this story I think it’s so well written but the author got FLASHBACK CRAZY I wish it was like a stretch of a few chapters all together or like dispersed between the present day, I literally rolled my eyes when daon had a flashback as he was leaving soohyun to the conversation he LITERALLY JUST HAD WITH HIM why did that need to be a flashback like what it kind of convoluted the point and watered down the impact of modern day actions to keep us on our toes about what could have possibly happened in the past like oh!!! You want to know?? Wait 50 chapters for an iota of expose <333 other than that though really fucking good story, fuck jaemin eat shit and die bitch
Also I wish there was more into Daon’s writing, the first few chapters especially with sunghyeon loving it but hating Daon, made it seem like it was gonna be a much bigger part of the plot than it was and there was SO much potential for it
I love a good smut scene but it makes me sad when this kind of stuff happens where the story becomes more sex injected with plot then plot injected with sex. Like the past 3? 4? Chapters were just them fucking? It happens all the time in yaoi but still makes me sad to see, I feel like it takes away from the actual sex when it’s the only thing you see every chapter. Just like. Oh wow. They’re still going? Alright.
Oh— that’s not….
but fr, I thought we might have had a fighting chance w this one but actually I think the seme is just.. unreedemable. Like I literally can’t fathom how he could go from here to make for a sympathizable character?
I absolutely adore how we get a mix of relationship pacing in this, from how quick nadrika and Robert are to love her to the slow burn we see with ettsen and elcat. Very good to have relationships all over the pacing spectrum makes for a good story
The noise I made when Penelope called herself out for acting like a villainess when she was about to hit eckles was INSANE this story is so fucking tragic I’ve cried like five times the writing is INCREDIBLE
Love some good plot progression and new plot arcs but kind of an insane choice to make the plot that the romantic interests literally cannot interact in a SLOW BURN story girl WHY WHY WAS THAT OUR CHOICE? HELLO? I’m so mad at least make them kiss first like what the fuck
I know it’s probably for plot purposes but I hate when authors introduce a character that looks EXACTLY like another character same clothes and everything PLEASE I can’t keep up
i’ve seen the spoilers and oo the reason why there is an exact look a like is so good trust me it makes sense later
Lemme guess, he's ray from another timeline or he's from the future,
But like I wish they at least parted his hair differently or gave him a different outfit
nope!! if ur curious i def recc reading the spoilers bc i honestly didn’t think of the reason of why the look a like is there
where to read spoilers pls i'm itching to know who was he
Why’s this kinda based a critique of the weapons industry? Slay