beta
umm, picking it up again after so long bc i thought this is boring and i still fr thought this is boring lol. Latest chaps (84) kinda fire tho.
spoils!
at first its kindaaa cringe ngl, i fr saw mc as if hes experiencing mid schooler chuunibyou type of shit, but anw i need to shake that thought bc uts rude??? I mean its all bc of his trauma and his trauma really went deep so cant be helped. hes really suicidal
the setting aint build well enough, i feel like its 84 chaps but its so lacking— the setting, world building and stuff making me aint feel attached to the story nor wanting to understand shit. But oh well its still 84 maybe this one still have a long journey to end, maybe.
like the romance ngl (it aint a harem, he stick with one white goblin girl, super strong too aind deffo aint a leech, love her sm) i like romance spice on my read— if its well porpotion with likeable fml, and oh boi she fits my tea sm