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The sad part is that I don't doubt that something like this would happen. It feels like the stakes are real and fear that sets in really makes this story interesting. The worry we feel for the mc keeps us wondering how he's going to get out of this terrible situation. The events are disturbing but the fight for survival is to compelling for me to even think about dropping this.
I need to know what happens, who dies? who makes it out alive? Is that guy with the different eyes an experiment gone wrong?