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What the hell, first of all the sudden sex threw me off like it was so cheezy so unlike the vibe of the whole comic before these last two chapters and what the heck is up with the art style
it is gorgeous but not for this webtoon!!!
like it is legit slice of life and u are giving this that vibes like the sex manwha shit
I DONT EVEN MIND BUT I WASNT HERE FOR THAT
WHY IS THE STORY SUDDENLY WEIRD?
it is an interesting concept but like idk why the first chapter felt so....empty
like why are the characters like this and
why does he talk like that
and idk i think the dialogues could do soooo much better
It is like we were introduced to the first character super shallowly and then it gets worse
lmaoooo
i genuinely liked the twist where he became a teller(in the first chapter that is)
the author could have done so much more
U can just notice the art style- (idk i dont wanna say it :p)
U can tell the author does not give a fuck about it being a nicely written plot since everything is so damn rushed for no damn reason.
maybe im dissapointed and i cant stop comparing it to orv where every single thing is detailed
and i am getting major harem vibes (the girls are just drawn like that for some reason) which is like ughhhhhhhh not again
istg if u use this idea for this shitttt