Sparkl3s June 27, 2024 3:49 pm

it is an interesting concept but like idk why the first chapter felt so....empty
like why are the characters like this and
why does he talk like that
and idk i think the dialogues could do soooo much better
It is like we were introduced to the first character super shallowly and then it gets worse
lmaoooo
i genuinely liked the twist where he became a teller(in the first chapter that is)
the author could have done so much more
U can just notice the art style- (idk i dont wanna say it :p)
U can tell the author does not give a fuck about it being a nicely written plot since everything is so damn rushed for no damn reason.
maybe im dissapointed and i cant stop comparing it to orv where every single thing is detailed
and i am getting major harem vibes (the girls are just drawn like that for some reason) which is like ughhhhhhhh not again
istg if u use this idea for this shitttt

Sparkl3s June 2, 2024 11:14 am

Just starting but why is her name Yurina like author could have gone with anything but YURINA? LIKE REALLY?

Sparkl3s May 28, 2024 2:31 pm

What the hell, first of all the sudden sex threw me off like it was so cheezy so unlike the vibe of the whole comic before these last two chapters and what the heck is up with the art style
it is gorgeous but not for this webtoon!!!
like it is legit slice of life and u are giving this that vibes like the sex manwha shit
I DONT EVEN MIND BUT I WASNT HERE FOR THAT
WHY IS THE STORY SUDDENLY WEIRD?

Sparkl3s April 25, 2024 2:26 pm

this is so embarrassing and funny to read
han seok reminds me of me around my friend when i was in grade 10 I WANNA CRY AND LAUGH LMAOOOO
I realized how obvious I WAS

Sparkl3s April 15, 2024 8:05 am

That one comment saying this was "enjoying" read is crazy. Get help man. Fucking hell
I can't with this...
Imma say it now, forcing sex in yaoii is getting underated. They really need to step up from whatever the fuck this was

Sparkl3s April 7, 2024 11:26 am

I GOT SCARED OF THE FIRST CHAPTER BECAUSE PEOPLE CALL ME VIS TOO AND I WAS LIKE WHAT THE FUCK???? AND AT THAT IT WAS UNDER THE NOTIF PANEL TOO- I DIED FROM THE INSIDE

Sparkl3s March 10, 2024 9:32 am

When u can't be with someone cuz they are into freaky sex





Poor brown hair guy in chapter 12

Sparkl3s March 10, 2024 6:42 am

Damn mother fucking hot
Like I want Theo so bad

Sparkl3s March 3, 2024 8:00 am

"bureau of investigaytion ✦" Bro u high as fuck, what in the fucking hell did u eat that u were able to write all that shit. Huge respect though, it is low-key giving slay.

    Cream soda March 3, 2024 4:31 pm

    Didn’t they copied it from Novelupdate page?

    Sparkl3s March 3, 2024 5:32 pm
    Didn’t they copied it from Novelupdate page? Cream soda

    I hve no idea, I lost my eyes sight trying to finish it.

    Cream soda March 3, 2024 5:35 pm
    I hve no idea, I lost my eyes sight trying to finish it. Sparkl3s

    Your pfp's sooo cute

    Sparkl3s March 7, 2024 10:33 pm
    Your pfp's sooo cute Cream soda

    U r cuter

Sparkl3s March 3, 2024 7:57 am

I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY
I LIKE THE PLOT AND THE CHARACTERS AND EVERYTHING
THE GRADUAL SELFAWARENESS OF THE CHARACTERS ABOUT THEIR UNUSUAL BEHAVIOUR WAS A FRESH BREATHE OF AIR
I AM ACTUALLY IN LOVE WITH EDITH AND KEL'S RELATIONSHIP
THEY MAKE ME KICK MY FEET IN AIR OMG

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