Really loved this from the beginning but nearing the final chapters, it started to feel more rushed and mcs character kinda got repetitive from previous chapters. Whenever something went wrong shed just cry and complain. Then whenever something unexpected happens, the sprit kings would show up (like every few minutes) to solve it for her. Seemed like she couldn’t fight her own battles anymore. Also had a lot of things that weren’t fully covered. I still enjoyed reading it but I wish they didn’t rush it as much.
Im sorry but this had so much potential—but it’s a huge flop. Fmc does nottt think abt shit properly or just doesn’t have the proper traits of a protagonist. The OG fmc was much better and did a way better job without knowing anything in the novel. SHES much more clever and acc knows how to go on about things whereas the fmc is just copying whatever the Og fmc did and then is literally hurting the male protagonists with her words and actions. She seems very avoidant and the way everyone is falling in love with her over a few small words or “love at first sight” is completely unrealistic. The pacing of this is completely horrible too. They’ll skip from one timeline to another so randomly, making it harder to process what’s going on. Complete garbage, DONT read.









Idk I want to like it and I do think the story has a lot of potential but it kinda just seems like someone stuck their OC in the story and made her OP asf with male leads falling for her for no reason. Idc if it’s realistic or not but her behaviour kinda puts me off too. Talking about eye candy and flirting with some other guy when her previous lover is standing next to her is kinda ermm..still seems like it has more potential but I’ll drop it here.