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Am I dyslexic or this story is a mess? No offense but the phasing of this story is one of the most brutal ones I've laid my eyes on. Completely illegible, why is it suddenly an omegaverse? Oh, now they're childhood friend? Can the seme stop randomly asking about the condition of the uke asshole? I know I'm being nitpicky but I can't be the only one getting a brain aneurysm after reading it. It was such a huge letdown for me! .·°՞(≧□≦)՞°·. I thought it would at least be coherent!
So real, its like they didn't show their childhood memories and focused on their fucking so sad
Art should comfort the disturbed and disturb the comfortable. Often this quote was misused in the defense of a blatant predatorial behavior, excusing abuse and rubbing salt on a burning wound.
The story approaches the trauma of an underaged SA victim unashamedly, graphicly showing us the victim's struggle like a bizarre voyer that sickened me to my stomach. The entire side of the story where Hoshitani's eyes follow him around, sticking his gaze to Kashiwase's skin at the thought of him being secretly a girl as if him being a girl ripped away his anatomy. It felt fetishized, It felt dirty, It felt wrong... The narration of the story was in the eyes of a kid but for the reader felt like a crime. Like an invasion of privacy, a disrespect. To me, the author failed to protect what was left of Kashiwase's chastity by using Hoshitani narration(a horny middle schooler). It only cements the fact that in the sea of eyes, none of it was innocent huh?
( Remember, you don't need to see it to believe it happened)