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I literally read the side story bc I am curious about the story. It is a little annoying but I don't hate it either. I just don't get how there are a lot of criticism but still reading. If not okay with this just stop reading it
I feel like the main story might be a bit better
Not wanting to be negative here but the bodies drawing was kinda weird at times. Everything beatiful but I wish the s3x after proposal would have been kinda special you know. Not only the sexy panty
That was the plan, but the bottom thought of something else. BUT I like the little kinky twist. It nicely highlights their relationship and the unexpectedness of the proposal