Trashi June 12, 2024 1:43 am

I love it, adore the story, grew up with it.
The relationships and characters matured as the time passed, the story became more grounded and healthier, the arguments - more believable, the motivations and goals - realistic.
But
The begining definitely needs a rewriting. From time to time I'll come back and re-read this manga, and you can see that at first the manga was only supposed to be a short about 6 chapters one volume piece but then it grew. You can see a lot of the typical toxic/worrying yaoi tropes in the beginning, from the weird age gap - I know it's "not that big" but there was no reason that it shouldn't have been set in collage instead of highschool.
The beginning of the relationship feels so rushed, but it's most probably due to the aforementioned set up of being just an one volume story.
The weird behaviour of Hazuki towards Naoto where he was angry at him, and being all pissed AT HIM for not sharing his trauma right then and there, I get it you want to help your partner - but to be angry at him instead of consoling him and working it out at his pace was really typical of the early bl.

Regardless you can see that the author matured with the manga, started treating the characters more like actual people rather than comical protagonists fit for melodramatic bl. It is seen through the inclusion in the rest of the story of more thought out characters like Shizuku's friends the teacher pair, and completely forgetting the immature drama inducing ones - like the girl that was the "pair" of Hazuki's at the beginning.

Also the world building around the main pair of Naoto and Hazuki. The fleshing out of seemingly background characters. I loved the side story of Shixuku and her crush and friend the mature way of showing a situation similar to Naotos - of a young omega boy ostricized just for his second gender, and what would've happened if Naoto had a support system of good people around.

You can feel and see the maturing and well rounding of characters throughout the pages, that they actually grow up and despite the occasional fight, which is now resolved a lot more realistically and healthily, stand tall as a beautiful family.

Okay rant over, if anyone even read this - thank you for listening to my Ted talk

Trashi June 10, 2024 1:27 am

Why does the mc look like a kid ? Like se definitely doesn't look like an 18 yo more like a 12 yo, the curse of anime female artstyle strikes again

    yewoo June 10, 2024 3:26 am

    she does not look 12??

    Illsuckurassspirits June 10, 2024 6:13 am

    It's just you Chile she doesn't look like a child

    Fujoshi for Fluff only June 10, 2024 10:27 am

    First of all it's not anime. Secondly, no she doesn't look like a kid. You have seen too much... Ig. Or would you rather they be with F cup just for the fanservice purpose??

    Trashi June 10, 2024 10:00 pm
    First of all it's not anime. Secondly, no she doesn't look like a kid. You have seen too much... Ig. Or would you rather they be with F cup just for the fanservice purpose?? Fujoshi for Fluff only

    I'm not saying it's anime... I'm saying that the anime same face syndrome strikes again, why do the male characters are drawn semi-realisticaly and the main female character looks like a kid?
    She's 18 and looks like she's 130cm tall, she TRAINS with a sword and has noodle arms, I'm saying she he's the exact same face and body type of all other manga/manhwa styles, is it too much to ask for a lean, muscular - from training, adult female protagonist. I know 18 is still young but she looks like a child

Trashi June 8, 2024 4:05 pm

Honestly I like Sho a lot more than Daiki, his relationship with Minjoon is a lot more developed and not as superficial as with Daiki, I don't mean I see them as love interests just Sho is an actual character and Daiki is just a cardboard cut out of a yaoi ml - just shallow, one dimensional

Trashi June 8, 2024 3:23 pm

I like the story but I'm a bit mad that the author is trying to make Margaret more of a villain than Admion, they should all be kept as villains with different interests but now Admion just isn't there and I want him to suffer

    Cristilla Zoey June 22, 2024 2:25 am

    That's trueee af , idk why they are directing the story against Margaret when it should have been Andy bastard and cruel Cruella

    Lyricalbunny June 22, 2024 5:14 am

    the focus on Margaret rn is because she actively harming FL daughter and abusing her, so of course the focus be on her.
    FL will gets her revenge on both andymion and his mother dw, she just slow burning it rn so her bitch of ex husband can suffer more. And he will suffer.
    Have a little bit of patience

    Trashi June 22, 2024 9:35 am
    the focus on Margaret rn is because she actively harming FL daughter and abusing her, so of course the focus be on her.FL will gets her revenge on both andymion and his mother dw, she just slow burning it rn so... Lyricalbunny

    Okay that somehow satiates my anger, cause I was thinking the .anhwa will only go on Margaret and Admion will just get collateral damage, cause as bad as Margaret is she still was also lied to by Admion so I hate him even more and he should suffer

    Lyricalbunny June 22, 2024 1:41 pm
    Okay that somehow satiates my anger, cause I was thinking the .anhwa will only go on Margaret and Admion will just get collateral damage, cause as bad as Margaret is she still was also lied to by Admion so I ha... Trashi

    Dw dw
    FL doesn’t care enough about her ex husband to spare him any suffering, he going to get his punishment in due time.
    She going to make him and his mother suffer a lot, it’s just slow burn revenge for now.

    I want to say that I love the fact that the manhwa addresses the “bad half siblings” thing we see in lots of manhwas
    The FL has a half sister (pink haired woman, very sweet)
    The ML has a half brother (second prince, doesn’t want to be an emperor and don’t want to compete with the ML)
    And of course FL daughter and Rosie her half sister who is very protective of her older sister.
    All of them have half siblings and it’s so refreshing to see siblings NOT fighting or scheming behind their siblings backs… it’s makes me happy and it’s one of the driving forces of me continuing to read this manhwa

Trashi May 28, 2024 1:05 am

Yeah no matter if you're blood related or not, if you grew up together as siblings you are siblings and having a sexual relationship with said sibling is just fucking wrong. Ewww...

Trashi May 19, 2024 11:14 pm

The fact that he can fit three dicks is astonishing and terrifying at once

Trashi May 13, 2024 12:04 am

Can't we just have a bl story without rape anymore? Like who's getting off on that shit?
Every manga/manhwa as of late goes down the exact same path like all those artists got one plot synopsis and just drew different colored hair dudes

    Savanah May 13, 2024 11:11 am

    It literally destroys the plot and is so fucked up to read

    User72 May 15, 2024 8:40 pm

    Exactly it’s so fucking unnecessary and I hate how they always just make the bottoms accept it and literally get with the same people who rape them like wtf

Trashi May 12, 2024 12:07 am

The translation is just atrocious, I really would like to read this manhwa properly please someone not using Google translate pick this up

Trashi April 27, 2024 6:47 pm

I need that groveling arc hard.
KNEEL BEFORE YOUR BOTTOM AND BEG FOR HIS LOVE

Trashi April 21, 2024 8:00 am

Am I the only one horrified by the piercing???
First of all ear piercings are NOT made to PIERCE WITH ! The lack of sterilization? Lack of blood??? The dull piercing would mutilate his body ?!??
Second ear piercings are NOT for nipples
Third it honestly looks so fucking ugly
WHY IS NO ONE TAKING ABOUT IT ?!?

    Duckinasuit April 21, 2024 8:12 am

    It's just fiction that's why it passed like that :')

    not a fujoshi April 21, 2024 12:00 pm

    we have bigger things to worry about than a possibly infected nipple piercing

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