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they better do some freaky shit i'm tired of these dom/sub stories never progressing beyond lame ass commands

Author you were doing good with the story there was no need for that

Yup... Jj, man I thought you were cool

what a big disappointment , i thought you were the whole green forest JJ ╥﹏╥ gotta stop reading this for my own good #－.－)

this was going so well and I was really enjoying the writing.... but boom, here we go again with unnecessary SA cuz writers can't seem to know how to move a good plot forward without it SUCH a shame. It's obvious they're ntentionally ruining JJ's character out of nowhere, even tho Leo clearly was the bigger cause of their relationship issues. I'm taking back my initial good review!

I'm a JJ defender and a Leo apologist, but also a Leo AND JJ hater. This is NOT the sub bottom brat x aloof dom top chasing BL I asked for

Another one in the casket lol is it that hard for authors to not make the tops in these stories vile rapists? Like this one chapter singlehandedly changed how I feel about JJ as a character. Now I don't even feel bad for him.

Like, we all knew Leo is an asshole, but there is no amount of asshole present in this story, or in general, to justify straight-up rape.

Deep throat Leo, cum and leave. Then Leo left dry wanting more then struggle again to figure out JJ leaving, instead of proceeding to a hotel because he assumes JJ also wants sex. So easy. That already is a call back to ch 1 when Leo left JJ blueballed. Leo is supposed to be the annoying one and I still don't like him, I can't with overly obtuse insensitive personalities. But man, the author be like, ooopsss, I made JJ a likeable character and viewers should only side with the bottom, aka Leo. So I will make JJ horrible and change the character altogether. This is just disappointing.

u know what maybe getting an amnesia arc wouldve been better than this

We all know that Leo is dumb asf, like he can't understand where JJs frustration is coming from but JJ, man you're going down hill. Man, you think by doing that leo will have a "realization " and will admit that it's his fault. I'm out yall, I will let this marinate for a while hahahahahhahaha

The constant switching of dominant/submissive roles between the two is so artsy, it's awesome and keeps you engaged with the comic even if you're not one to read sexy scenes. I'm a lesbian so I don't care much for sex scenes in yaoi unless it uses intimacy as an extension to the couple's love for each other, but with this comic even if their freak scenes are not as focused on the emotional aspect but rather carnal desire, they're so creative and nuanced you can tell the artist/author spent a lot of time thinking about how to approach them. Even if they're having sex constantly you don't get bored of it since it's done so well and could light up the heart of even the most non sexy fellow. Every time I read their freak scenes even I'm like "wow, that's sexy" because it's so well put together. Not to mention it doesn't oversexualize the characters either in an attempt to make it as sexy as possible (which is usually in such bad taste), no, the sexiness is more rooted in the dynamic between the two and their exchanges with each other. Seriously this should go down in yaoi sex history.

My focking GOD.
Yikyung being the sub maso TOP who also has a sadistic streak. Dayum. Please I want a top like Yikyung.


Or I want a bottom like Dojun. I want them both.

Nah my dick is up (im a lesbian)

WHY YA'LL ASKING FOR SWITCH??! YOU GUYS DON'T APPRECIATE A SUBMISSIVE TOP GOD

LIKE THIS IS RHE HOTTEST SHIT I'VE READ

It makes me remembered that one artist who shipped top Caesar x bottom Zhenya

Now that's what I like. Black flag x black flag

It's good, trust me. There is so much character and relationship development. The art and writing/translation is BEAUTIFUL. DON'T GIVE UP AFTER THE FIRST CHAPTER. I know the instinct when you see something you don't like/agree with is to completely give up, but DON'T. Don't immediately hate on something at the first mention or show of something disagreeable just because it's easier. See where it goes, because it might give you something beautiful (of course this pertains to manga and the wonderful world of fiction, not real life with serious crimes and such)

Seriously give them babies

Need someone to slap Ririko in the afterlife for me
Traumatizing ppl left n right for what

Rly hope we got more chapters

BRUH PLS DONT TELL ME THIS IS THE END?! I NEED MORE!!! sentarou being a “ghost writer/producer” isn’t talked or elaborated that much yet!! and ofc touma would need a new job, and they need to talk about the misunderstandings in the past and sht plus I want to see more of their daily lives with meguru!! PLS TELL ME THERE WILL BE A NEW VOLUME T—T

As a story this was good. But irl this would be a terrible and illogical situation, leaving a small girl with two grown men who have no prior relationship with her.