beta
Because the pacing is ridiculous and doesn't have any business being that fast if its not an adaptation like what? It had only been 35 chs and a lot of things already happened lmao
I mean yes, I love when things are not dragged but I feel like things are being unrolled too fast in this one. Like the arcs are too short. In the arc where mc runs away, there is a lot happening but nothing was given time to stew that it failed to give the illusion that the ml really spent a long time searching for mc. It felt like they found him within 3 days to a week lmao
I feel like there is no enough emotional investment to whatever is happening because a problem will literally arise in a chapter and then be solved in the same chapter or the next one.
But despite my complaining, I'll still be reading this coz I love not using my brain cells while still enjoying some cliché troupes ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
And the art improvement is a plus!