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I enjoyed reading the first season because it was well paced and told a good story - S2 is rambling and disjointed. There are too many characters doing way too many things in the present, then we get backstory chapters mixed in here and there too. I enjoy backstory - it's what makes a story come alive, but mixing it up with what's going on in the present is confusing to the reader. AND THEN - just for fun - make sure to dangle a lil' love triangle all up in that confusing mess and hope ppl will keep reading to find out what the endgame is.
I'm a writer, so this kinda shit irks me to no end. I'm over it. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍