What kind of supposed big strong guy equates a little headache with doom period symptoms that last two weeks? Eat my ass. If alphas are so great, why do they all have to literally rape and trap people?
It was very disjointed because of how much the overall tone and each character's attitude kept shifting. It reads more like a collection of genre tropes than a cohesive story.
Sending this to the juggalos, hope it helps ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~