
The story seems jumbled, like it can't keep track of a single plot line. Goes from the Sorenbergs, to the Eisenbergs, to the king... It's all mixed up. It felt like they completely forgot about the king for a while there. However, it is a very cute story, and I'm not much of one for childcare stories.
They spent so much time implying he was going to be the demon lord, only for it to rapidly end with some experiment. It's kind of a waste, in my opinion.