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i'm turned off by the alter just disappearing. the first couple pisses me off like, god, just fuck already. everything moved perfectly for them, his traumas vanished, but now he says 'maybe i can't control myself.'
he had DID for years, but magically, without professional help, it disappeared or 'merged.' bad plot. he was supposed to control and accept the alter, saying he can't control himself now contradicts the merge. plus, if the alter can still take over, it didn't merge or disappear, just shares memories. it makes no sense.