
Don’t get me wrong seeing the dads going undercover was hilarious. I like the kids I do but I wanna know more about the bigger story. Her powers seem to be a big key factor but we don’t know how or why. Plus we still have the family conflict with her aunt and cousins that need to be handled. And I WANT MORE GRANDPA!
I get that you need to lay the foundation for the friendships and love triangle but you already did and is just dragging it out. If she is gonna stay at the estate, I wanna see her lessons or self growth. I wanna see her bond with her father more.
I love this story I truly do. I just wish this didn’t happen so often.

I honestly think this is much better instead of rushing things. Normally similar stories like this have the MC regress then actively revenge to her enemies like framing them or building their power both in skills & connections. But those kind of stories rush things and when they add romance it's like forced cuz there aren't enough background for the love interest. Meanwhile in this story the MC and love interest have past childhood before they enter the romance route.

I dont think they meant they wanted this to be like those stories. I think they just wanted to know more about other characters rather than build on romance so early in her life. Personally i would like to see her character build more as well as what her powers mean and such. Its still a cute story anyways. Just voicing opinions for fun

I don’t mind that our boys are getting paired up. I truly don’t. However I don’t like red haired girl and all the drama she brings. I don’t like unnecessary drama especially if it’s not well done. She is that and I’m not a fan of that potential relationship.
In general with these side stories, I’m groaning at how long these are. This series is great. Don’t drag it out with more random subplots. All they had to do is wrap the loose ends quickly and effectively and a sweet epilogue of the future. But nooo….
I’m gonna keep reading hoping it gets better or that it will change my mind. Lets see what happens

Wow a revenge plot that is fast paced and gets resolved in a decent amount of time?! ITS A MIRACLE!! lol
Honestly I really enjoyed the story. Our boy was a great protagonist to follow with his brilliant cunning mind and great fighting skills. Did his powers seem very much like Solo Leveling? Yes but I still think our boy had enough original/unique powers, skills and items to make him different from that guy. The world itself was well done and I did enjoy some of the side characters.
If I had put on my critical writer’s hat, I wish we got backstory on messiah guy. Not to redeem him or anything but to get us to really understand his mind and dislike him even more. Those three good people in Messiah made me wish that our boy had an actual relationship with them or other members who had the same noble ideology as him. We saw a lot of the bad people on the opposing side and their relationship with him but I’d like they showed the few good seeds, interact with him more and him planting seeds of doubt about messiah guy before that big ending.
Overall it’s still a great story and I’d reccommend to anyone who wants to read a cool and epic revenge action story.
Spoiled children need to be taught their lesson that the world doesn’t revolve around them and that they aren’t that special. So I cannot wait for this little girl to grow up and try to get her revenge only for it to backfire in her face. She will have forgotten how the royal family doesn’t forgive twice. Hehe I’m evil I know but I’m honestly a believer of love being both cherishing and disciplining your children properly.