beta
don't come at me for saying their first time felt underwhelming. let me explain, the sexual tension btwn them was so electric, mix it w forbidden relationship they've been farmed into, even a hand graze felt nswf; followed by two kisses that took nearly what felt like a century to take shape and w all the drama going around my expectation for their first time fell short of what was delivered BUT this is just my opinion. idk if it's the dialogue in btwn of awful censorship runing it for me or it's just writing but good art couldn't create a atmosphere that would leave me in awe.
p.s. maybe I'm taking this too seriously and author just wanted to put out a chill smut for haesoo, in that case, go girl! get that dick!!