I can't get past chapter 4 man ... it's seriously difficult to read this esp when fl UNIRONICALLY goes "I'll help you ! I can save you !" holy fuck it's so hard to read without cringing . she pulled a pick me girl going "guys guys stop ! :( look at me prince , this isn't the you I know and love :( what color is my hair :((" god I srsly can't with this ... and the beginning is wonky and even the development and dialogues ain't it . "hi I'm your tutor I can fix u !" and in the span of a whole four chapters she's alrdy tried to "save" him when she can't even do anything fr someone tell me this is a joke .. where's the slash j shawty
omg i just realized that she really is a pick me girl when u said it huhu lmao i hate it
DWJDAJBW I THOUGHT IT WAS ONLY ME the second-hand embarrassment is so bad for me
This had a lot of potential honestly. But the flow (was too fast), dialogues (of for glob's sake), art (was good in close up but not overall), characterization (tried too hard but made it so generic and cliché), is so so bad.
Oh for glob's sake* #－.－)
genuinely fucking confused with this plot . make it make sense , do you want the parents to be shitty or good ??? cuz if you wanted them to be good you fucking FAILED "oh dear I know I basically abducted you with no explanation but it was for your own good :(" like wh . what ?? pick a side bruh , and COMMUNICATE damn . is this the 1800s where they got no forms of communication ? no .
damnnnn what a detailed ass dream , he can have coherent dialogues AND really hot sex in his dream ???? I can't go one fucking PHRASE in my dream before having the most random shit happen like BOOM sudden teleport and timeskip I now have 6 kids and am divorced
LMAOOO this is so relatable
OMFG THIS MADE MY DAY
lmaooo someone said to stop commenting abt hating the red haired bitch and I'm in TEARS LOLLLL , she's literally the antag bro ... she was WRITTEN to be hated deadass .. it ain't like everyone's hating her for no reason so yea fuck the red haired antag
Literally sis. I hate her sm! (╬￣皿￣)
NEXT TIME SHE SEES THE KING I SWEAR IF IT AIN'T ON SIGHT . I'M GONNA RIOT HE'S A FUCKING !!!! CHILD WITH A SUPERIORITY COMPLEX I'M GONNA FUCK HIM UP IN MY DREAMS
tbh y'all going "oh if this was a villainess revenge story things would be different" ... no ?? I'd still hate that bitch lmaoo like "oh us black mages have been oppressed for so long" boohoo cry abt it . there's a reason why ?? they're oppressed ?? black magic is literally harmful to everyone and yet you think you're in the right ? like I literally do not care , they were criminals