
while I love the general and hate the cp he's making the situation a whole lot worse for the mc.. either he's going to suffer or the mc is going to suffer or both of them suffers together. He doesn't have the power or authority to challenge the crown price and by doing this he only makes the cp unnecessarily jealous and we know what happend last time he got jealous... Though I will give credit where it's due. he's been an angel to the mc treating him how he deserves and saving him from being raped to death for the second time I just hope he has a plan or something and isn't just impulsive

yk what taking a step back and moving away from how tragic this is.. isn't this about generational human trafficking? specially how rich people get away with it? it uses the analogy of pufferfish and dolphins to show that once your trafficked you can't really get out its a ongoing curse your children will also have to suffer through.
I'm not sure about other cultures but here in America Native Americans and Hispanic immigrants have been through this where they were born and raised in a trafficking environment controlled by the rich
but I know it's a one shot and not everything has to be a happy ending this one was just "bad things happen" and that's it. there's no real lesson that's learned here or point yk?
(hope no one takes this as me defending this otherwise I might kms)

I used to hate when some bls were r15 but now I wish there was an r15 version of this so I can actually know what the plot is.. like the dude is going through an external crisis of new crush and old crush being related and realizing he hasn't gotten over his old crush like I wanna see how that goes genuinely but nah
also am I the only one who doesn't like his roommate/friend with benefit?? like I feel like this thing would be better and different if he were just not involved

man the title was super misleading I thought this was gonna be a super wholesome bl but nah.. this reminds me of another hs bl where it had a cute wholesome name only for the ml to be obsessive and batshit crazy.
I can't remember the name but the mc had orange hair and the ml had red hair and they were in hs, and the ml had the mc friends tell him wherever the mc went. this is like that
I'd take this over the copy n paste omegaverse, we're only 5 chapters in maybe they'll be a plot twist with the seme? we currently know very little about him so I'm hoping he isn't as innocent as he seems