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This story is getting more interesting than my initial thought. I like it!!! So everyone follows the flow of the story, but they can "wake up"/have freewill depending on how important they are in the story. Killian was able to have his own thoughts because he's more on a supporting character. Cliff on the other hand, being the MC will have no choice but to act however the Author wants. He's at their disposal. Im conclu, no one is really a villain other than the Author who moves the characters.