
The fuck, I thought he was gonna go through each one of the seven towers. What I'm kind of disappointed to be honest, like I wanted the story to be a little bit longer, and I wanted him to like grow his talents more and not just suddenly get a power boost and like
"oh I'm a god now". It felt very forced, the pacing was trash. It feels like the writer started writing this shit and then they got tired halfway. Like why would you write this? Why would you waste your time writing this? like you can just tell they ran our of ideas quickly
Yeah, I think this is a future DNF. The author doesn't even know what he wants and the story progresses too quickly and not quickly enough at the same time. There is not enough world building, and the tiny amount that there is doesn't even justify 16 chapters. He is quickly becoming a Gary Stu.