
Tomitas drawing at first was so ordinary and his role was the same as any side characters,plain face,few appearances.I never thought that the authors would give him a story so when he was at the bar with saito I was shocked that the authors hinted that he would have his own story I did not expect that.But his drawing became gorgeous afterwards and his story is better than natsume.
I feel the rush towards the end.I was hoping for a good drama involving that co worker.I feel like the author were dragging this and filling it up with more sex scene instead of storyline.This could be 15-30 chapters only if they focus on the story.
i mean you are reading a SMUT story so....
but it has a potential if he/she focus on the story,smut with good plot but nah.