Not every chapter hits me but man the ones that do hit really really hard
It looks so cute with its little face kahdkshdkdhaj indeed them to MAKE UP so er can so see the birb we never get birbs in yaoi
That must be some soft fabric but still . The zipper... its gotta be at least a little u comfortable to wear against bare skin right???
But also he's so pretty aaaahhhhh
That's all I got. That was smth else.
I came into this knowing they were freaks but man jacking it to baby pics on the first page while the adult subject of the baby pics fucks your ass is smth else.
Every year I get older the more I wince at adult x minor stuff. Just make then both adults. You can have literally the same dynamic with a late 20s yakuza and a barely 20 broke college kid and it's much much less weird
Incredible storytelling. Just absolute peak. All stories about the horrors of human greed should happen between long sequences of slutty hole getting pounded
Yall I was so hype for the more morally ambiguous and complex scenario that was set up in chapter 1... The reveal that mr ghost boi actually just liked MC the whole time and also never planned to try and kill his own best friend is less interesting to me.
And then of course there's Deus Ex My Friend Is Actually Just an Angel and Has Been This Whole Time Because We Need to Retroactively Explain Why the Plot Happened in a Quick and Simple Way Instead of Following Through w
With the Higher Stakes Set Up At the Beginning Because Reasons IDK So Things Will Probably Work Out Dont Even Worry About It.
It's not a plot device if I just turn one of my existing characters into a magical solution right?
I'm not the only one annoyed by the lack of build up right?
I laughed so hard on the way you wrote it. I feel you, it's such a random nonsense no brain explanation
I mentioned this a few months back and a lot of people told me how I could think there's plot holes when everything is so clearly explain in the plot. Make me question my reading skills for a sec lmao
Making him cum in front of the old couple was diabolical