beta
This was an awkward read, not only because of the characters personalities but the rough translation. Im sure the translator is really lovely, no one is good on their first try, and I still appreciate it. Effort is effort, as readers we need to be grateful.
I felt really sad for Naho. I think this is an awkward and sort of hard to follow manga in general. Why did it seem like the blond boy (Hakusa?) was almost bullying and excluding Noha at times, then sucking up to him? Aoi also came off strangely, sort of green tea bitch vibes from his permanent smile.
I really disliked Kana, there's nothing good about him in my opinion. He rarely defends Noha but also gets jealous easily. If I was Noha I would also be incredibly insecure. I think he could be redeemed through more groveling, but that doesn't happen. Instead we get a scene where it's like them having mistress love affair roleplay.
This manga changed my life. This makes me feel real penis envy, I love Haga