I don't think there's an inherent problem with men writing wlw stories and vice versa. Love is love and sex is sex. But I also can't shake the icky feeling, knowing there's a man behind it, sexualizing women and an entire sexuality. It gives me the "man in a bar leering at a female same sex couple" or "oh you are lesbians? Can I watch you having se......
2024-09-12 07:37 marked
I love a good polyamory story. This wasn’t one of them. The FL was passively accepting of being whisked off planet, transported in what appeared to resemble a prison transport, displayed at an auction style venue, fought over by a couple of extremely cute men, and then spending the night bonking her brains out with the one she picked. Ok, nice fantasy. But that’s human trafficking, the nightmare of any sane woman.
Then her partner leaves before she wakes, she is dressed like a sex object, goes off to class to be given an assignment to have more sex, and stops to grab a couple of slaves on the way home… All while wearing a dewy expression akin to a stunned mullet. Oh and within one day she is already forgetting her home planet.
I have read that the story gets good around chapter 30, but the FL is so vapid I can’t be assed waiting to get there. I am sure she gets her happy 4 way relationship, more power to her, but this kind of inane beginning doesn’t have me invested.
2024-02-15 03:37 marked
Why can't I defend yuri smut?