Kido is such a green flag, this man literally helped him for years to come over his traumas, showed him the way, took him to therapy, got him into college, got him a home and most importantly his unconditional support and love. Someone make a million more of this man and scatter it around the world, we need some more of him
Omg I have so many opinions on this story. First of all I do think the storyline is very good, like the plot and everything, but I do think it is lacking in some ways and that resulted in not enough buildup. When portraying a story that takes place in 2 timelines (in this case even more) its SO important to really take the time to detail everything out. Which I think in this story could’ve been better.
Adding to that point if you chose to do more then one life, and make it a lot of past lives thing there is a amazing chance to showcase each lifeline slowly to show where it happend that Narye all of sudden decided to approach him kindly instead of demanding.
Third thing is the whole calling him Narye after/while doing the deed is somewhat crazy to me. Like what is going thru is head? He is clearly in a euphoric place so why? (And why is Narye 3.0 not suprised by this?)
Lastly the ending felt a bit rushed, I get the whole ‘he is now trying to get better’ ending but it could’ve been played out a little more. I do like the realism that they ended up together and he still has a (little bit milder but still) obsessive character. I mean that would be realistic seeing my man has lived so many lives and 60 years in between all of them.
Okay really last note; its crazy to be that the protagonist didn’t find out it was actually him??
Honestly I usually am always on the uke’s side (like 99.9% of the time), but this one is just not it. The uke, being the older and more responsible one, is involved with a child that has more traumas then he could ever handle. Develops a somewhat healthy bond in his own way, meanwhile the uke who knows about his anxiety and everything just shoves everything aside and acts indifferent to a child that is more then obviously mentally unwell.
As someone that is almost 30 he should’ve known (especially as a prosecutor) that the seme needed real professional help and he needed guidelines (which they both needed to follow), seeing how fragile he is mentally. I’m even suprised he held on so long and tried to always turn over a clean sheet and ignore the obvious that he was being lied to all the time (he was even willing to ignore his own mom’s death reason while knowing he was being lied to?) smh
ALSO NEED NEW CHAPTERS ASAP
Someone tell this ‘mother’ person they are getting in the way of my boo’s. Move bitch, I need more of my cuties.