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It was good. The ending was very happy, there wasn’t any conflict that would ruin their relationship, the other characters had their own mini side stories on how they got new lovers/proposed to lovers, and the main couple lived their life happily with their children and pang who also transmigrated back for her.
The pacing was good, although I didn’t expect them to venture off from the main couple without explicitly saying it. Usually they would put it as side story for when the other side characters get their moment to shine, so it felt like there would be more chapters/more conflict coming up.
Villains— I think the pink girl’s motivation was pretty solid, that her anger and hate for jiwon stemmed from her comparison between jiwon’s and her family at a young age. She relied heavily on jiwon to make her judgment (ex. Jiwon gets this but I don’t? Not fair), even in prison she relied on jiwon to make herself feel/look better. I’d say more but my brain is blanking out
The mother (who asked for money) felt like a filler plot, that scene didn’t need to happen because nothing changed from jiwon meeting her mom. It wasn’t established that jiwon needed to meet the mom or wanted to, so when the mom came and left it didn’t left an impact because she didn’t stay too long (pretty sure she only appeared for 2-3 chapters).
As for the ex boyfriend- idk now that I wrote all that I’m lazy to talk about him.