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75% of the chapter was just unnecessary love talk.
It always seems like the author wants Shinoa to be Yu's ultimate goal romantically, to the point where the character's construction makes her completely irritating, really, is romance the only goal in the midst of so much going on?
not to mention the point that there is no person who is not selfish. like, yu did everything to please everyone and the only thing he wanted was mika. and everyone wants him to be the one to sacrifice everything, shinoa wants yu for herself, guren and his girlfriend want the best for themselves, everyone wants their family back and all at the expense of yu's sacrifices