Those little bits of transformation sequences in Chapter 4 were so, so good. Looove the way he keeps slipping from one form to another throughout their interactions.
Feels pretty rare to see proper TF stuff in a BL manga but it was a pleasant surprise. I'd love to see some more overtly furry stuff from this artist, I bet it'd be great.
Please, for the love of God, if you're going to illustrate a story about winged characters- LEARN HOW TO DRAW WINGS. The mops all of these characters have on their backs are awful. Nevermind the shoddy pacing, those fucking wings are so distracting. There are so so so many guides out there on how to construct a feathered wing correctly. It's REALLY not that hard.
Actually I think it's just alright it's not bad it's a little messy but it can still be improved when time passes and we are still in chapter 18 their is a lot of Artist improve their Technique and drawing styles after of some chapters, and it's a bit rude the way you say it it's so disrespectful not only for the artist but also to us that like his/her work.I get the point that the wings plays a very important role for the story so they did draw it as best as they can and it's not like your the one doing it,if you are also an artist who draws then do you get the point that it's not easy to draw specially things that needs to be detailed and their also need to do the backgrounds colors and many more so how the heck you tell them to "LEARN HOW TO DRAW WINGS" THEY FUCKING LEARN IT OK?!THEY NOT JUST DRAW IT OUT OF THEIR IMAGINATION LIKE ITS NOTHING THEY ALSO LOOK FOR AND SEARCH FOR THINGS THAT CAN BE USED AS THEIR BASIS AND IF YOU DONT LIKE THEIR STYLE THEN DROP IT THEY ARE NOT AT LOSS IF YOU DIDNT READ THEIR STORY JUST GO FIND ANOTHER WINGED STORY THAT CAN PLEASED YOUR PERFECTIONIST ASS ok that' all.
Now do this consistently while also drawing bi-weekly serialized chapter release, maintaining the quality of everything else like anatomy, character experessions, poses, foreground, background, colours, shading, panel layouts, etc.
I've seen sloppily drawn lazy webtoons, this isn't one of those. Like i get the story is sloppy as hell(manwha did novel plot dirty) but the art isn't the same. So far it has remained consistent.
There are plenty of ways to stylize and simplify birdy wings without drawing them like boneless feather dusters slapped onto a character's back like a cheap Halloween costume. If anything, knowing how they work makes it *easier* to do just that! That is why seeing mop wings is so frustrating.
I don't believe that the issue here is the time constraint- on the contrary, it's pretty clear to me that the illustrator dedicated quite a bit of time to rendering the wings. The problem is that, on a fundamental level, they simply do not know what a wing looks like. There are tons of simple guides out there, and even learning just the bare minimum about how feathers layer makes a *massive* difference.
Squidlifecrisis did a great little guide on some common mistakes with drawing winged people- https://imgur.com/a/un0ghHv
The very first example they've got here of "what not to do" is pretty much exactly what's going on in this series lmao.
At the end of the day I think a lot of folks just fail to think about wings as proper limbs, and in doing so they wind up missing out on so much potential for interesting new body language & social interactions with winged characters.
I thought you have a really flashy or something big to prove your self but when I look at it it's just a scraps and nothing to show let's say yours is much bigger and a little detailed some how but it's just a 1 panel 2d art while the one your telling rude things done lots of panels of this what you so called doesn't know how to draw wings.And If you have a brain you would know that artist has different Art style I know you know a bout it since you claim your self being one right?,and after all what you done is can only be considered as an sketch while this is a big story and it's has a lots of views and followers even though you said that they need to learn how to draw wings while you act like high and mighty when you only has 80views how funny it is
Laughed entirely too hard at "Concentration camp for men who can have children." Whoever put that tag there, thank you lmao