beta
he got harassed and suddenly they fell in love? so they did some sexual stuff then love just blossoms like that? -_- what, it's kinda cliche and the dialogue kinda puts me off sometimes, like when he said "he only got eyes for him" gurl what??? All he did was avoid you a bit y'all didn't even speak with each other that time be so fr why's he already obsess, OH and when uke said he said mean stuff to him...what mean stuff?? Idk cus the seme repeatedly said he's cute, that's mean? And also the scene where they confessed and had sex and randomly the seme low-key reads the ukes mind and then they start talking about him being jealous, that felt so random to me TT but anw seeing the uke crying was very cute u-u and yk ikemen are nice...ikemen are always nice I love ikemen
Am also kinda put off by tsundere so this might be a biased comment, am biased, this is very much a biased comment