Argument: 5
Character Development: 2
Art Style: 3
Relationship Dynamics: 3
Originality: 5
Emotional Impact: 4
Narrative Pace: 4
Consistency in Quality: 4
Plot Complexity: 3
Re-readability and Recommendation: 3
Physical Value: 2
Memorability: 2
Entertainment: 5
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Total Points: 45 out of 65
Argument: 5
Character Development: 5
Art Style: 5
Relationship Dynamics: 5
Originality: 5
Emotional Impact: 5
Narrative Pace: 5
Consistency in Quality: 5
Plot Complexity: 5
Re-readability and Recommendation: 5
Physical Value: 5
Memorability: 5
Entertainment: 5
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Total Points: 65 out of 65
Why did they leave the chapter like this? Also..J.J what happened to you? Okay...kiss him, to clam him down, awesome but...please guys...talk it out...just communicate to each other and fix this...then you can have lots of sex but please talk and open up your hearts! Damnit
Why did the chapter end at that precise moment? I would love to see Taesun taking the initiative for this time
Argument: 5
Character Development: 3
Art Style: 3
Relationship Dynamics: 4
Originality: 5
Emotional Impact: 3
Narrative Pace: 5
Consistency in Quality: 3
Plot Complexity: 4
Re-readability and Recommendation: 2
Physical Value: 2
Memorability: 5
Entertainment: 5
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Total Points: 45 out of 65
Argument: 5
Character Development: 5
Art Style: 5
Relationship Dynamics: 5
Originality: 5
Emotional Impact: 4
Narrative Pace: 5
Consistency in Quality: 5
Plot Complexity: 2
Re-readability and Recommendation: 5
Physical Value: 4
Memorability: 5
Entertainment: 5
They are just so perfect. I'm in love with this family, all good, green flags everywhere, no unnecessary drama...this is simply perfect
I'm waiting for baby mama to show up outta the blue and try to get back with him... "for the baby's sake" or some other nonsense.
Hahaha nooo, please don't let this happen...I mean, I'm aware that this could spice up the things between them, And I would love to see Hae Beom Jelaous or something, and figthing for his family but...oh well. You know what? No I want to see that hahhaa, But I hope if this happen it won't be too angsty
I know. What I really want is for them to learn how child safety seats work (even on the bicycle my guys), and then live all lovey-dovey together forever. Just a snuggly happy story of their life together.
But editors hate happiness. Bastards.
Please, Taeha, don't be too harsh with Chansol...he doesn't want to...please just talk it out and have lots of sex with him! Pleaseeee
the last part
HAHAHA I know but I'm being honest I don't Taeha to misunderstand and hurt Chansol
Will there be redemption arcs and kind of a romance here or...is it only going to get even more and more twisted till the end?
This story is unusual in that it doesn’t follow a linear progression of a typical plot line. The redemption is this scattered series of small acts throughout the story that summarizes to a series of realizations of the characters’ true natures and actions. Essentially, the story never attempts to redeem the characters because the author know they’re irredeemable. So instead, the author explains why they are the way they are through past traumas.
personally, it doesn't get more progressively twisted, bc i had desensitized myself to the shock-value moments and gangrape is the worst thing mc goes thru in terms of physical violence, but mc's suffering does gets worse and worse, emotionally and mentally. at some point, i did shed tears bc of how sad and heartwrenching it was. anyways, if u want a clear redemption arc will full-on groveling and confession, it wont happen. the wholesome romance stuff only happens in the side stories.