
Like I just in awe, like what does fl even do? Does she have hobbies? Or any personality? She really lacks common sense. It would be a different of she was abused or something but she wasn’t.
She keeps going on about protecting image, but the shows up in a servants carriage. Even the former fiancé side piece has more development than her.

This left me very unsatisfied. the set-up was good, but everything fell flat. I feel like if they had more commoner women characters, they could’ve have explored a lot themes, like how nobility affects relationships, gender and power something like that. It would also add to the world building too.
She can’t be the only poor class woman who’s lost a parent. What about the rest of the women in this country? How are they surviving? Why are most of the characters noble men, women when it’s a story about a poor cross dressing woman trying to find her place in society?????
Phew…sorry had to get that off my chest. Although no one might read this, just putting it out there.

She lowkey moved like the serial killer tho…like obviously she doesn’t want to kill him. But she did want to ruin in some way, just because his ‘niceness’ pissed her off, like that was kinda random in a way.
But I don’t think he’s a complete victim tho, he definitely knows somethings up with the lady. This last story’s characters are so interesting.
The drama from chapter 28? Completely unnecessary after saying ‘i love you’ so many to turn back around and call it just a contract. Mctchewwww