I've finally caught up and read everything. This is my opinion and I'd appreciate it if anyone didn't try to argue with me over it but I just feel nothing but pity for all of them. I don't wish death upon them for what they've done to Yugeon or anything of the sort. I don't even feel hatred towards the Center who are antagonists (not the main villain but a clear enemy and problem) in this story. I just feel pity tbh. This is clear evidence from the Center's actions to the people creating a cult that this is a very possible mindset for people to have when facing something as haunting as anomalies and Almuten to me at least and I genuinely just wish that nightmare would end for them. They have to sacrifice their lives and constantly experience pain and fear going into those gates and seeing horrors to the point of going insane. I'm not saying in the slightest that their actions shouldn't have consequences and tbh I'm upset that they dragged Yugeon into said horrors and treated him the way they did. the Center and the 4 of them. But I just feel bad for all of them. One was treated like an experiment; basically was one tbh, one killed his sister who was a guide, one was driven to the point of literal insanity, and I'm feeling pretty confident saying that his psychic ability played a hand in that, and the 4th idrk aside from the fact that chan (forgot their names already damn so sorry if I'm wrong) was part of the Saliga-? unit and had to go through that training. I don't think it specified what was wrong with him that made him that way. It did not specify the psychic user either but it's pretty evident he's mentally unstable at a dangerous level and it's not even bc of a lack of guidance. Yugeon is also just fucked up as well. Before they even brought him in the way they treated him expedited that process tbh and his brother's death was the straw that broke the camel's back. I'm not wanting a romantic ending to this at all whatsoever. It just feels like one of those situations where Yugeon will be with him or them but will never truly forgive any of them and they're just with each other for each other's comfort and care if that makes sense idrk how to explain it well. Like they're choosing each to fall into the abyss and sink together and stay by each other's side accepting the pain they inflict on each other. This whole story imo plot aside is just a whirlwind of actions fueled by circumstances, PTSD/ trauma/ mental instability, rape, and manipulative tactics (examples of manipulation are when the commander used Yugeon's brother to bring him to Erewhon or when the Center used Yugeon to bring the commander to the portal or when the commander used "good job" stamps to let him see his brother. these are specifically the ones targeted at Yugeon but I'm pretty sure there are more cases of manipulation not regarding him like when the commander exposed the center to the public). I typed a lot sorry but I just used this as a means of wanting to put what I think out there as well as get my thoughts sorted as well. To make it clear though I don't like rape or the abuse they put Yugeon through. Like I said before there should be consequences for the actions they took regarding Yugeon and disregarding him. They all need serious help when this is all over.
chat im fighting through the rape scenes to catch up to yall bc i dropped it and be able to talk about the plot (im on chapter 20) pray for me
chat im rereading this and i... SOB i just love reynold's character development. It just brings tears to my eyes.
Me too
Its been 4 years daddy... when are you coming home? Mommy has been out all night leaving Little Timbum and I alone in village kimbaku and has been returning at 12. She just lays around and sometimes bringing random men inside our home. Timbum and I are forced to stay in our rooms. We miss you daddy please come back
i was gonna comment about not liking the coworker anymore for ruining the atmosphere between em but everyone else is doing it for me
YESSS WHOOP HIS ASS that egotistical self-centered cocky mf. mf looks like a Bolivian water bug with shoes on tap dancing by a lake
Wow. Your poetry brought tears to me eyes.
nah that cocky mf looks like he sweats crisco i swear
Nah im not done with him yet. I hate shits like him who think the world revolves around them and think that everyone should bow and kiss his shoes and lay out a red carpet. If eve and the rest of them wasnt around you wanna know what he would be? a S-class prostitute the fucking self-centered whore. Look like a dysfunctional squirrel with sleep apnea he can go fuck himself.
This type of insult is poetry.
I'd like to thank everybody on the first page of the topic section for showing me that the art is good but the story is trash and will make me cringe. I'm trying to find new stories to read and this was underneath featured. You saved a passerby from wasting their time bless you
Damn, I wished I had your luck lol (seriously tho this reads like a wattpad fanfiction I tried to move further but I stopped halfway through chapter 3)
bless your heart
Yes callisto call his bullshit out. I fucking love you sm you deserve the world with penelope
I've been sitting here for 5 minutes dawg idk what to do now that it ended. I feel so empty. Like- i hv other stories that updated but it doesnt feel right to go and read them.
Your majesty this is the one time I'm relying on you and expecting you to handle that. You better kill that fucker. Don't let me down and you better make it painful
Nah kill him very painfully slow until that disgusting fat bitch himself beg to die. Dont let all of us citizen of yaoiland down your majesty
right
Real asf, I want him to cut that mfkers dick off slowly, then his fingers and then his head and carve rapist on his head and send it to his father