No_more_drty_deeds July 13, 2023 12:53 pm

Besides this whole thing having zero plot is also has zero consistency. The author really can’t decide if what the Mc is going through is awful or if he’s actually totally into it. One scene you feel bad for him and then in the next scene he’s super horny and that is not just an assumption but based on his own thoughts. So which one is it supposed to be, are we supposed to feel bad for him? Root for him? Get off to this bs? As many others have said this is a very nonsensical plot and honestly at this point I am just kind of laughing when the next ridiculous thing happens and the next ultra horny dude with a huge duck attached to him appears. I hope it’s clear that I don’t find a rape scenario funny, it’s just in this instance that I can’t take it seriously.

No_more_drty_deeds July 13, 2023 10:45 am

So like I get it, I do love asshole characters that learn and grow etc. but how in the world do you want to make this top redeemable? He has zero care for others, continuously rapes the mc and every chance the author has to make him not be a complete asshole (for example ch.28) they just keep going. In chapter 28 the Mc shows so many times that what is happening is hurting him and that he is uncomfortable but the top just disregards every instance. There has been no actual character development and I don’t know how you are supposed to turn this character around on any believable way.

    Jay July 13, 2023 11:10 am

    I agree completely… the story isn’t going anywhere if this is what the author is going for.

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