I read all chapters in one go and I am pretty disappointed with this. I liked the starting point a lot and saw a lot of potential but it went down the drain pretty fast. I liked the Mc with his kink and that he had consensual loose relationships because of it. But it just became a rape fest soon after. The „ml“ is just dragging him around and everything something traumatic happens it is somewhat acknowledged and then forgotten/ glossed over immediately. The artstyle carries this hard because the story is weak and honestly a mess.
Ok I know this might sound awful and I do not want spoilers below but it would be such a great ending if the crown prince gets killed and our mc is convinced he did the right thing. Then he goes into the bed chamber and sees the painting that reveals the thruth that the prince was little pearl all along.
I think it would make the ending very bittersweet (I do hope for a good ending but I do not believe that it will happen)
I hope jean get killed while saving cp that way he will know what he has lost
omg!!!! i totally agree w/ u on this whsjdjdjshsj im up for an angst and tragic end
So his thought process is „I will make him stay away from me because I am the same person as the people who made his life hell so might as well add to the trauma and sa him“
But I’m pretty sure as soon as our mc found out he wanted to stay away from him, this is so unnecessary and as others have said seems like a weird addition from the author. Idk why they felt the need to add this because this really destroys the story for me. Up until now I thought that ml might be some undercover cop trying to infiltrate the network but with this I hope this is not the case, because that would make it even worse. Idk how the author is going to resolve this.
I don’t really know how to put it but something about reading this just makes me incredibly sad. Their dynamic and the idea of losing yourself are really well portray and while they are really sweet I think it’s so tragic. Like both of them are drifting away from who they used to be and there is so far no end in sight for it. Now hitomi got the same “illness” and I’m am curious how this whole story gets resolved by the end of it.
Also but thanks to the translator!
Besides the „we actually met xx years ago“ trope being super overdone, it would be nice to get some more information about it. Did Dominic just get his memories back and that’s why he remembers the Mc? Because I can live with that. But if he remembered him from the start then that will devalue the story by a lot for me. Because that means the guy was like „oh shit I met him as a child and since I am now a college jock I might as well hit that“…………….
I think it’s implied that he recognized Eugene by his piano playing. So no, not from the beginning.
that means he fucked him after reminiscing about knowing him as a child, devilish shit
Yeah, super unnecessary cause now I wanna know why you’re playing college football. Why you in a college period
to hunt vampires right? The college probably has a lot of inexperienced vampires that he could hunt and kill
I feel like every vampire we see is like a couple of hundred years old. Mc is the only young one significant to the story. And sleeping around with new adults like you yourself are their age is weird. I feel like this wasn’t thought through or just added as the story went on
I love this authors other works but I really couldn’t get into this one. I don’t really see a reason as to why he has to raise him from an toddler age. Even if he grew to adulthood in 5 years that still makes the ml his guardian and a parental figure. This would have been a great story but even the great artstyle and the rest of the story are not enough to gloss over this glaring issue.
yes omg idk why but I feel like in yaois the authors are kinda obsessed with the parental figure (blood related or not) and the son like being together at the end
Not a great ending for this chapter but I like that the author didn’t choose to make the crash completely Leo’s fault. I also saw some people bring up the amnesia trope and as one of my most hated tropes I really hope that’s not what happens.
Is half of this comment section colour blind? I can only see red flags so far. Minwoo is possessive and not in a cute way. It’s to a point where hes trying to control everything that the Mc is doing. Sorry I would not touch that guy with a ten feet pole. Our ml isn’t much better but at least he „only“ has the typical asshole tendencies we have read in almost every story at this point. The big difference beruhte two guys is that our Mc is having a good adult time with one of them and gets completely suffocated by the „best friend“
I was thinking the same thing. They’re all pretty bad characters…
This is such a good read. Can’t help to laugh at the fact that the primus was Dominic all along and now he’s just doing college football, talk about a career change (well besides the investigation situation he’s also doing)
Leo:
-seems to be the one that was more active in the relationship aka approaching JJ and staying with him
-is demanding
-is spoiled
-seems to act promiscuous but we haven’t seen him actually cheat or anything close to it
JJ
-very passive
-doesn’t communicate with his partner
-leaves his team mid season because of personal reasons
-breaks up with Leo without explaining him why
-rapes him
Ah yes JJs behavior seems very balanced and fair for what Leo did???? (Sorry but none of this story explains why JJ is acting like such a dick towards his ex so far)
as much as I hate what JJ is doing rn, Leo only used him for sex and made him feel miserable. What JJ shoudve done was communicate tho lol. But I get the resentment and anger for him, it looked like for Leo, JJ was just a sex toy and a luck charm for his races
Yeah but the thing is Leo didn't know that Jj was feeling miserable... Because he didn't say anything to him, he just obeyed and obeyed, how would Leo find out that he doesn't like it if he doesn't say anything about it and instead just bottle it all up and collect it until he explodes and break up without giving him a reason, and to be honest with you, even if what you say is true, all my sympathy for him kinda disappeared the moment he raped Leo
yeah, that doesnt take away Leo being an awful boyfriend, but I agree with the last part