This is such a shit story I thought the rape tropes were over. This story just glosses over the fact that the mc is getting continuously raped but just passes it over with “but it felt good” I hate how the author makes the mc to stupid to understand that he’s getting raped, blackmailed and beaten. The top is also such a badly written character that even compared to other yaoi characters he has no substance or intriguing personality. The nerve the author has to make it “comedic” when it’s just disgusting. Overall boring, uncomfortable to read and has nothing to offer.
LOL Rape tropes are over? Don't read BL and then the rape tropes will be over for you permanently. I mean isn't it selfish to wish your tastes onto other people?
You're giving the same, pardon me for saying, TIRED criticisms every other rape-hater has already given. If there was not any rape, I bet this criticism would be much lighter. You're going by your prejudices instead of objectively reading the story through an intelligent mindset. sorry
You're mad at this, hate that, are disgusted by something else. Shit hate hate shit. Try saying something nice. It would be an amazing change from the dowdy dreary hateful comments those of us who like the story are so tired of reading
I can't abide the pretentious business of making a criticism as if you're talking story structure when what you're actually doing is just venting more spleen
Gurl fr? We've had so many great and entertaining Yaois over the years with loving semes and they've been at the top of reading lists!
As a community we've all worked to let authors know that this is neither okay nor what we want to see, this was really good until the uke was forced into it
Old YaoiFan, bitch, please. you sound like Shirley Temple in Storyland
So people aren’t allowed to give opinions anymore? If I read some thing that I don’t like I am free to say that it wasn’t to my taste. Also no duh the criticism would be lighter if the rape wasn’t there. I’m not saying rape should never be put in anything i’m saying this comic doesn’t execute it properly in ANY sense the author is just including so the mc have a reason to fuck. Rape shouldn’t be played off as something that can be forgotten about. it is HORROR to go through. But by all means no ones stopping you from reading this. Why should I force myself to say something nice when the the most problematic part is right in your face i’m not gonna say “yeah this story is problematic and it’s characters aren’t that well developed and supports unnecessary rape scenes then tries make it comedic ╮(￣▽￣)╭BUT the art is pretty!!!! so it’s not that bad!!!! If you’re tired of reading the same response to bad rape tropes then maybe stop reading the comments since no one is going to stop displaying their hate for this story.
Calling me bitch really? Tacky...
Sounds like either you're the author/close to the author and can't take criticism or like you're in favor of rape. The way you're defending rape in a book is just bizarre and unsettling.
The problem is that rape is being romanticized here, and we're all just supposed to enjoy it. No, it's 2020, we gotta move past that
yea I agree.
you guys keep talking this romanticizing rape - LOL. Unbelievable stupid concept. please describe how you do this.
that's right. no opinions allowed. lmao.
- you said "so the mc have a reason to fuck." - sounds good to me!
a lot of things are horror to go through. why are you so hysterical about rape in particular?
- who are you to say it's unnecessary, and why do you keep ragging on the characters? It's not your art.
- yes, the art is gorgeous.
-because I'm one of the people working on this story. that's why
lmao continue being mad cause everybody hates this. Not my fault you’re one of the people working on this.
People who disrespect uploaders and people who work to bring you thes stories are the lowest, most undeserving. Unbelievable response
Well, if you do work on this story then try to take the criticism and build from that. The story had a lot of potential until the rape scenes and the lack of preparation before them sleeping together. You can just make your nect stories even better, everyone learns through experience, it's normal.
OldYaoi for saying this: "Well, if you do work on this story then try to take the criticism and build from that."
please die
slowly and painfully
OldYaoiC*nt If you are indeed old, you should know better than to make yourself an enemy of free speech. I can forgive ignorance in kids, but I can't forgive bigotry in adults who should know better. Are you a racist, too?
I mean can you be any more idiotic than to actually speak to me as if you don't know that his is a Korean manhwa and not done by an American artist? And if you could actually speak to this author, which you can't, thank god, would you so blatantly insult her? Or maybe you don't even know what an insult you are to an artist. You clearly know nothing about art, right, uncultured OldYappieFuddyDuddy? You think authors like the one who wrote this manhwa grow on trees? From your blabber I'm pretty sure you don't know how much talent, skill, and hard work goes into a manhwa. It would turn your hair even grayer. You have the unmitigated gall to speak down to one of them? or even speak to one at all... Try to speak to a Korean artist the way you spoke to me. Her fans would tear you limb from osteoporosis limb. you go to hell. what a horrible person How do you stand your own self?
I've got a sneaky suspicion that irl you're a rape apologist...
this is such a shit story i thought the rape tropes were over. this is story just glosses over the fact that the mc is getting continuously raped but just passes it over with “but it felt good” i hate how the author makes the mc too stupid to understand what’s happening to him. the top is also such a badly written character that even compared to other yaoi characters he has no substance or intriguing personality. overall boring with nothing to offer.
what does fl mean? this is the first time i’m seeing people saying it
It's Female Lead
yeah the way it just glossed over the whole rape and stalker thing is freakish like i get it’s yaoi but still it’s been a while since i’ve read one that left this bad of a taste in my mouth. kind of gross how the uke just accepted everything in the end as well.
Thank you for the translation!! It’s really sad that you won’t be uploading anymore but we can’t force you to upload so good luck bettering your Korean!!
translator please don’t listen to the negative comments about your trans. So many of us can read it just fine. We love your translation!!!
If I saw chowon I’d step on him until he was a small brown stain
I want what they have they are so happyi’m so happy for them i hope that man isn’t gonna steal they’re baby or something