beta
The narration feels like reading someones diary. I just can't shake off the feeling that the 100 days already happened and the mc's gone. Where this is the mc's diary he made throughout the 100 days, which the narrator is now reading. It feels so off-putting in a good way. It portrayed what he is feeling in that moment. U can just feel the emotions together in every inner dialogue.
I hope this story won't stray(specially in details and subcontent) and lead the story into one of the good gems. I'm anticipating to know what happened to the past rewritten future and their progression. I want to know if how the story will go on, it's very interesting. What will the mc do? Will he stop for some reason? Will he really let go of his own life? Will he have a change of heart? Will there be another issue?
i regret reading it early.