NOOOO WHY THIS BL DAMN HUHUHU I LOVE THE FATHER AND SON CHEMISTRY DANG
The narration feels like reading someones diary. I just can't shake off the feeling that the 100 days already happened and the mc's gone. Where this is the mc's diary he made throughout the 100 days, which the narrator is now reading. It feels so off-putting in a good way. It portrayed what he is feeling in that moment. U can just feel the emotions together in every inner dialogue.
I hope this story won't stray(specially in details and subcontent) and lead the story into one of the good gems. I'm anticipating to know what happened to the past rewritten future and their progression. I want to know if how the story will go on, it's very interesting. What will the mc do? Will he stop for some reason? Will he really let go of his own life? Will he have a change of heart? Will there be another issue?
i regret reading it early.
That's the ending????? That kinda feels empty.
This have a good art fucking hell got me hiding in my covers. Didn't expect it to be scary and funny at the same time. I can't believe yihyun is finding his timing on haesoo to flirt lol in the middle of those scary times at that. I'm laughing and scared at the same time. The concept is good but the dialogues and its execution could've been better, on the other hand the art is executed nicely. This was such a fun read but the ending is a cliffhanger, like that's it? It just skipped 2 years and show a little details. Should've narrate about their relationship and what happened to those people involve like just a sneakpeak, but the last chapter more centered on taehyun and haesoo is over him and love yihyun. That's it didn't even elaborate how he love yihyun, like the things they've been doing. Kinda disappointing in that part. But overall it was a scary and funny read. 7/10
I love how they gave a lot of thought to every characters. They felt alive, and they have such a beautiful souls really. They have a good background story and have such heavy morals and principles. Everyone have their own unique characteristics.
The story is heavy on plot and characters. I'm actually kind of disappointed in defense parts. The tactics are simple, i mean its good but i hope they elaborate it more. Somehow i really wish they would show the map for every tactic/strat mentioned. Such as showing that these are standby, the healing team n such, and where they're located in the map and castle. That's why this and that can happen. Tho its still good u can still understand what's happening anyway.
Also, u can really feel the 'games essence'. Tho it doesn't show much and they implied that it's the reality now. They still use game jargons which is a very good choice in my opinion. Not only can i understand more but it also just reminds me that this was a game. Making everything makes sense. Do u get me?
Additionally, the plot is so thick. As shown in stages we are still in stage 5. The map shown in early chapters of the lake kingdom. We still have a long way to go. There are so many variables too, we also got some sneak peak of the other sides war. The plot is really complex and i love it, and i love it more how every characters are very important not only in the defense but also their stories and the other war.
There's so many mystery that we have yet to know. One that i will be very excited to see will be Ash and Lucas' past. Very well, i will let this marinate again see ya in years lads!!
art: 5/10 good at best art that is just used for gay sex
setting: 3/10
plot: 0/10 +1 for effort ig
dialogue: 0/10 sex talk cringy and disgusting asf(specially the rape parts)
character: 0/10 +1 cause i love noah
Ending: 5/10
Drama: 1/10 so mid and typical
Author slow down. This feels so fucking fast we r still at chapter 10 and there is so many characters are getting introduce. You can't even get hyped cause you don't know them. Atleast take time to introduce them. It feels like i am reading a season 2 n shit. I don't know anything much about the other characters aside that he will help them cause they are 'comrades?' idr with his mother. But we are still leave in the shadow. We know nothing, but they still introducing a lot of characters, I don't even know what's their goal. Now, they're saying that maybe his mom is alive, like what? can we know his mothers story first before we got to that point? We just saw a breif intro and story. Who r the villains like what's the rising point that we gonna look forward too.
i feel like i just skipped half of content. Slow down. I love the story art plot etc tho. i just hope the author will take time to introduce characters and the past stories.
kind of Interesting, it still have small chapters so i understand that it still can't answer the things i want to know. But anyway good plot and good art for now.
edit: I can't resonate with the story at all. It feels dead. I mean yeah good art, but the dialogue don't feel like they're characters at all. They're just like a wisp with text. I don't feel compassion with the mc with the revenge thing too. I will still try to read tho.
