That was quite good. Art was beautiful and the plot is actually kind of simple. I actually expected more complex plot and i was wishing vx and black to be different person (Which i know very well it wasn't, it was obvious) just so it can be more complex. Tho i think the author made it that way so the romance will go straight through the line and no second male lead to worry about. The characters are very cute, tho i hope they can increase other characters screentime too. I am actually very curious about the team zeta, like when did it start, or the name of the other characters (real life names), how all of them meet, etc.
Also i was actually expecting to learn a few things about programming or hacking. Not necessarily specific, but i wish they would elaborate the broker, etc. things in terms of their jargon. Like how does it work and all. The server attack and defend and all. Oh i would also love to know about their game too idr the name. That game that ranks them. I would be lying if i said i wasn't disappointed. But i really love the romance i was just sad that they didn't get to introduce the programming n hacking. Tho maybe it was made like that to make it simple to the readers.
I love it tho, wish the characters best ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
When he was talking abt his dead master it made me teary the delayed grief hit was really sad. It was so genuine
It's not as interesting as i thought. I stopped at chap7 and i can say I don't like it. Art is good characters r kind of good but the plot is kind of bad?... The first chapter got me hooked but the next r uhh i don't like it.
From what i can see it has great potential but i think it mainly focus on the mc. only mc. I thought i will be seeing girlboss fight. But she was lazy, i mean yeah it's fine if it's her character but the lack of goal and sympathy doesn't feel right to me. It didn't even explain her powers yet. I will assume currently that she can alter reality by using the book and it was given by the star guy and she was the cause of regression of that one guy or should i say that star. Her personality is kind of annoying too, like ur at other persons house that didn't even invite u and u try to be rude? ur not even thankful. Yet the characters don't even bat an eye to that kind of personality. They don't scold her and just let it go. She is kind of arrogant, could be good personality if it was written on other specific scenarios. Her arrogant personality is not what i want to see on those scenes. I don't feel the story at all. It's like an self insert au of the author.
That's what I Say, I don't like the mc. If She's lazy at least she has to use her Powers to have a confortable life... Like... Wouldn't she be rich? And that lack of empathy, she didn't help those people at the beginning and didn't defend herself.
I really hate when a powerful hides their Powers because yeah (I'm watching You, god of highschool)
i was binge reading this today and i hate the fact that he still didn't tell that grand commander to be a tailor like that's her dying wish can't u tell her. Anyways i feel bad for sarante he was such a good guy and probably know a lot of information too. Why didn't he tell the mc tho if he knew his death is near. So frustrating.
i feel like if he told her to be tailor she’d take it as insult because as she said, her dream is to be a commander or wtv. especially since she told him abt everything she’s going through to achieve her dream of being a commander
Tbh yea that would be offensive of a stranger moreover someone younger would go up and talk to me just suddenly said "yo I think you're more suited to be a tailor rather than commander" the mc felt fucking guilty when he saw her saying she aspire to be a commander.
*if a stranger
Imagine you dream to be a lawyer and some kid said "I think you're future self would be glad if I told you to be a tailor rather than being a lawyer"
*YOUR OMG
Well you guys make sense. Yet, in this timeline, i want her to stop being a commander. Simply because she already done what she needed to do and doesn't need to bear any responsibilities any longer. She have already done enough. I want him to tell her that and respect her dying wishes.
why are their brothers have brother complex. I kind of don't like tong yangs brother. Cries but doesn't even try to improve himself for his brother.
I don't know why i love this story that i can even still re read it for the 3rd time. Honestly i don't remember much anything everytime i reread the story. I am srsly glad i have a memory of a goldfish. To feel the same feeling that it gave me before is honestly a bliss.
I'm back here again. I always check on this because maybe there will be a side chapters. I really love this story. The dialogue and the way the author portrayed the characters are very beautiful. Also, she have a knack on writing shitty ass characters lol. I love those shitty ass characters tho. I've been following this story so I don't remember much scenes in the story now and I can't even re-read it bcs i just can't go through it again, I'm a coward you see. All i can do is hope for sides.
When i knew that the last chapter was uploaded, I can't even bring myself to read it. I've delayed it for months, but just recently i finally have the courage to read the end of it. I was like a proud parent seeing my children grow and be finally happy. I was very into it, I don't know when or how did i get attached this much when i don't even remember much.
Crazily, i know that i hated this story but i still proceed to the story but maybe at one point in between dialogues it must've made me feel with them. The author executed the story perfectly. The pace, the emotions, the dialogues, and many more. I am glad to read such story. Tho I'm sorry to the author that i cannot support them in the original platform. I will wish them well(づ￣ ³￣)づ