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The narration feels like reading someones diary. I just can't shake off the feeling that the 100 days already happened and the mc's gone. Where this is the mc's diary he made throughout the 100 days, which the narrator is now reading. It feels so off-putting in a good way. It portrayed what he is feeling in that moment. U can just feel the emotions together in every inner dialogue.
I hope this story won't stray(specially in details and subcontent) and lead the story into one of the good gems. I'm anticipating to know what happened to the past rewritten future and their progression. I want to know if how the story will go on, it's very interesting. What will the mc do? Will he stop for some reason? Will he really let go of his own life? Will he have a change of heart? Will there be another issue?
i regret reading it early.
I love this comment so much I read the story immediately. Love the story too, very unique and you’re very right about the diary. We really get to see the world through the MCs eyes in a very real and depressing way.
Love your perspective omg that makes the reading experience ten times more bittersweet and depressing! Rlly hope this story sticks through with the tone and plot!! Theres so much potential
NOOOO WHY THIS BL DAMN HUHUHU I LOVE THE FATHER AND SON CHEMISTRY DANG