Ahhh yes the three elements of a bad yaoi: Rape, boring relationship dynamic, and NO PLOT. What a thrilling read.. truly
Don't get me wrong I like the story, however, it seems a little fast paced; it's as if there are pages or maybe even chapters missing. If it was really written this way I wonder why the author decided to make it a quicker story, the primary issue seems to almost be resolved in two chapters... Based on the character introduction and plot set up it seems like a story that would have longer development.. hhhmmmm just a thought.
I'm sorry sir, but all of your symptoms indicate that you are in fact... In love. Remedies include: running away from your feelings, accepting your feelings but hiding them, and confessing. I recommend the last option
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The concept depth and intricate character design is amazing. The story flows so well and it drags you between two or three plots at a time; it feels so realistic and raw. I love the fact that we see so many different characters and their thought processes as well as their morality. These characters definitions of right and wrong fluctuate and guide their actions and it's just incredible to see which character s carry their own story on their shoulders rather than being guided by the story around them. I loved the unfinished stories because it leaves you room to wonder but what I especially love was that last story. I didn't necessarily like it for the characters themselves or the plot, but for the antithesis of the characters place in life, mentally. We don't (or I don't) agree that Aerak should have forgave him but with that last dream we see the extent to which each character perceives their place in the story and the desires they have to complete it a certain way. We see the depth of Aeraks emotions and love whereas the other guys actions and thought are sexually and attention motivated. It makes you wonder if such a relationship will work out or the path that it will take. While the story leaves you with the best possible outcome one can help but to think of the direction their story could go, especially seeing as how that blond dude cheated just to gain a reaction and receive attention. While some of the relationships are supported by healthy communication others simply exist by consequence or coincidence, the stability of their relationships and the dynamics off of which they are built are incredibly versatile and it is honestly what makes this story to enjoyable and engaging, it's what keeps me coming back for more and what inspired me to write this long ass post. So thanks for listening if you stayed.
I see rape has been used as a plot device again... There are so many possible directions this story could have taken, so many, but here we are. #disappointedintheauthorandanyonewhoconsidersthisgoodwriting #pleasestoprapingpeople
Was gonna comment the same about lazy storytelling
I really, really, enjoyed this. I do wish it would have been longer so we could see deeper character development, like with the dad, but it is amazing definitely in my top ten. One thing I REALLY wish they would have focused on is the sisters journey and her relationship with jealousy and acceptance. Unlike some others I really admire how she changed even though her actions were unacceptable. I wanted to see a more intrusive and darker explanation of how she felt and thought. I wanted to see her communicate and reconcile with her brother and mom and watch that growth. I especially love that they left her as an independent character, in the sense that she didn't have a love interest. I think that makes her story even more powerful because we see her as an individual, where her actions aren't tied to her sexual orientation. Anyway amazing read, 10/10 would recommend.
Indeed. I definitely agree to everything that you said. How I wish they didnt gloss over the forgiveness scene and the explanation on everyone's side because as much as Hanah was an ass, there was a bit of it that also came from the parents.
Even before Jun was born, her inferiority complex already took root but her parents didn't notice because they were too busy with Jun being the male child. I just wish that she could have explained why her inferiority complex grew over the years and how her mom's doting attitude towards Jun somehow unknowingly exacerbated the problem.
All in all, it was still nice.
I do need Rin's mom and Hyesook side story tho. I wonder how the confession would play out and what will go between her and her ex gf from there
Hey, just in case someone doesn't know this, SILENCE DOES NOT MEAN CONSENT. Seriously wtf, I'm so tired of seeing relationships fall apart because of bad communication. It's also a terrible plot device. I'm gonna be honest I'm pretty disappointed with the direction this went.
I know this doesn't really have anything to do with the plot or general story but I loved how the woman character was just a normal person. To often lately, I have seen so much misogyny (intended or not) in the bl that I have been reading and it is almost as if the women characters aren't even people, they've just become these hyper sexualized depictions of women through the male gaze. So it was a breath of fresh air to see a woman just be a cool friend and co-worker and not some hyper feminine representation of a weak, bitchy, or otherwise shallow female character. Food for thought I guess. Side note this was SO CUTE!
Naturally it depends on the author, you can just put any people regardless of everything to fill that villain role. Not only in BL, in shoujo that actually is pretty common thing. I'll say it's just the easy choice albeit cliché to put a girl as the annoying person.
Don't forget, this' BL. You're hoping to see two guys hook on, so a woman is natural enemy to the story thus the easy choice. If it's a guy, it's going to be a jerk most likely. Not always.
Anyway you're overthinking and please don't generalize stuffs on a whim, it's called prejudice.
Actually I major in gender studies, I am not overthinking and I am very aware of the context in which the characters are presented and represented. Also I speak from MY experience with thousands of BL and other manga and comic genres. They also don't have to cast the woman (bitchy, senseless, mean female character with no depth) as the villain, though I agree, it is the lazy, easy choice.
Agree with you 100%! I say this all the time, it’s also common in a lot of other genres and media which is so sad. And if it’s a dude that’s the annoying one or the villain, it’s typically someone “ugly” or “fat” or whatever cuz if it’s someone hot then it’s not the same unfortunately :/
Yes so so so true! Agree with what you’re saying 100% about the male gaze(oh how I hate the male gaze) and the stereotypical weak, shallow, bitchy female character. I was so immediately cautious when they introduced the female character because I’ve been conditioned into thinking of female characters as a plot device for the author to introduce negativity (jealousy, envy, bad behavior, etc). And I am so grateful this was not the case! I wish this is how it was in so many other mangas too (or all media really). Am very grateful for a human depiction of a woman, as a friend and a side character with their own life. Other authors need to take note!
I don’t think this is overthinking at all. I’ve read hundreds of mangas and I constantly see this trend of female characters being depicted as just caricatures of, as OP put it, hyper sexualized depictions of women through the male gaze. They’re bitchy, they’re rude, they’re superficial and only care about appearances, they’re overly interested in feminine and cute things, they’re sly, their whole existence is centered either on looking good or finding a boyfriend. I understand it’s BL so obviously the focus will be on male characters. But it’s not like we exist in a bubble where only men exist. Friends, coworkers, family members, acquaintances, staff. There are so many places in a persons life where women simply exist. I wish that BLs would just also depict those relationships and show women as people with their own regular lives.
Idk. Sorry if this went too overboard lol, I understand you’re just speaking about manga villains who often tend to not be very well written anyway. This is just me ranting because I’m frustrated by the lack of good female character depictions in media. I just wish there was more of it and more of treating women like normal humans!
Always be wary when you go out drinking kids, never turn away from your drink or leave it for a second and if you do just get a new drink. (this goes for everyone, cause it happens to guys too) Better safe than raped and or dead
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Well, there's also the concern that the bartender could be working with someone and slipped something into your drink when his/her back was turned away from you. So don't put your faith in bartenders you don't know either, regardless of the reputation of the restaurant/bar.
I really hope we are going to get into the real crux of the issue and talk about emotional labor, perspective taking, genuine interest, healthy communication, and all that good shit. I mean seduction is nice but my man needs to be building relationship HABITS. Making pancakes every once in a blue moon isn't going to cut it. You can't lull her into submission by taking the weight off of her shoulders just because you want your old life back and then put it back when you feel like you've succeeded. You gotta recognize that these people in your life are their own individuals with their own thoughts and feelings. As well as you think you know someone you never truly will. Put in the effort to see her as a person and then put in the work to see things from her perspective and make the changes that need to be made. Don't fucking ask her what you should do, at this point it is your responsibility to recognize the pitfalls you've created through your own self-interest and self-serving behaviors.