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Omg wth no background plot to what or who they are??? it somewhat makes sense but without who they were before all this crazy thing happening it just makes no sense cuz why is THEM that they want and what did they do to the junnin in the past now forwarding in the present
OMGGGGGG THIS STORY IS SO GOOD THE BEGINNING WAS A BIT CLASSIC BUT THE ML IS A GREEN FLAG!!!! HE CAN LISTEN TO OTHERS AND RESPECT FLS DECISION!! And omg I LOVE how they look different in their perspective for Evangeline hers looks like cute, funny, but also shows her thoughts and how rube looks loveable but also show his protective side when hes around eve and gets all flustered randomly which confuses her and its so cute, and for rube his well HIS POV MAKES EVANGELINE LOOK SO CUTE AND PRETTY but also really shows how she looks whenever she’s thinking of og plot bc in her pov she looks like she’s doing a bunch of silly things in her thoughts while it’s the opposite for rube since his pov makes eve look like she’s disconnected herself from the world when she’s thinking deeply about the og plot which is such a cool detail to see, and also how eve looks from his pov is that he sees her so much more beautiful then she already is bc she shines in his eyes and with every little thing she does simply makes his heart flutter hard