Why are there such plain readers? Coming here to read a story and if it doesn't meet the criteria of perfect ML/FL start to criticize and not 'ANALYZE' them. I think the author is daring. We find so very few stories where the female sexuality is explored and strike one imediately if it doesn't fit to standards or it implies 'improper' behaviour from a female. We don't have the patience or interest for a 'what if?' story. What if the ML is a virgin and what of the FL is a player? How would thry meet? Would they learn anything from eachother? How would they develop?
If one fails to notice the subtle changes in here, how FL begins to mellow and how the ML begins to open then I consider one has failed as a reader.
Acceptance is key or even better, if one finds the story of low quality or that it doesn't meet his'her standards then stop reading it ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
Is this on tappy?