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Desgod July 10, 2024 2:08 am

Okaaay…I get showing not telling is a thing when it comes to storytelling but why does it feel like we already skipped ten chapters when it’s chapter 1?
I can guess what’s going on by context but I’ve never read anything that literally starts with zero exposition. Like who the hell are these people? Why did you wear an eyepatch when you don’t need it? How can a carnivorous mystical being go from a diet of the blood of your enemies to eating only strawberries? How old are you? Who are these enemies!? How is your father okay with a shirtless homicidal manic hanging out in your yard?! Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)

    Kon September 13, 2024 4:46 am

    Omg so trueeee. I was truly lost like what's going with the plot.

Desgod July 8, 2024 12:07 am

Why do their heads gotta be shaped like guitar picks?
Trauma and mental illness are just used as insulting plot devices for a weak ass story.
Also pushing the same toxic “I can change him!” Bullshit.
I’m annoyed that I had to read 13 chapters to find the one alright breakdancing joke.

    YoloForMe July 8, 2024 12:19 am

    Phew, good thing I read the comment section first! I hate this type of art AND plot (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸

    Who am I? July 8, 2024 1:50 am

    Huhh are we reading the same thing
    It is soooo freaking goooood. Ig people can have diff opinions
    Thank god i didn't read comments and gave it a chance.

    Heelian July 8, 2024 10:02 am
    Huhh are we reading the same thingIt is soooo freaking goooood. Ig people can have diff opinions Thank god i didn't read comments and gave it a chance. Who am I?

    I read the comments and gave it a chance and it's good. The art style is a little off but the story is good

    ms. steak July 8, 2024 9:36 pm

    the holy trinity: guitar pick heads, yaoi hands, mental illness as a convenient excuse for everything

    JulyInAugust July 8, 2024 9:42 pm
    the holy trinity: guitar pick heads, yaoi hands, mental illness as a convenient excuse for everything ms. steak

    Too long. I'll shorten it and just remember "guitar pick heads is a convenient excuse for everything"

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